Hey Ningers,

If any of you have some extra time can you pull out your cell phones and tell me what you think of my mobile landing page?

Any advice on ways to improve it?

Any suggestions would be greatly appeaciated!

MyCreationz.com

Thanks friends,

Stay creative!

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well, you have 4 links and 50% of them take the visitor away from the site. I'd change that asap

SP

;-)

Thanks for the advice guys! I moved the "share" page i created away from the landing page.

Looks good - if I were to change/modify anything I would:

  • Lose the serif font for "Continue to Site" - it doesn't match the rest of your text. I'd also make it a little bigger.
  • I can't say what it looks like on other phones, but mine is 1280x800 resolution and the text images you used for your links look a tad blurry. If you left the text as text instead of an image you'd lose the reflection but it wouldn't blur regardless of screen size. 
  • add a background! you have so much cool artwork on your site, I think it would be cool to have a background and then you could put your buttons/links in a floating content box (with a white or faded white background) so it doesn't get too busy. I haven't messed with the mobile site in ning yet so I'm not sure what exactly you can do with it, but I think that would be cool if possible. 

Thanks so much Ron! i appreciate all the feedback

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